Score: 10

"lolawesome~!"

submission: This is UNMEI

date: May 14, 2008

first off that was one awesome flash!! i loved the animation, you really sticked to a lot of detail and the song may not be the kind i like, still very awesome for this flash.

but i still have two questions: 1st, are the kids and the medication related?? they're both green and white, whats with that.... i thought the people were like... people in the body...so like a reddish color?? i havent seen the first one which could explain that. 2ndly, who was that girl? is that also explained in the first video orthisthing?

anway greatflash
btw the ending is probably my favorite part

Score: 2

"wtf"

submission: Mcgregor my Dog

date: May 14, 2008

come on man....

RLY?

its nice you like your dog and he's born to be wild....

but seriously

RLY? please put some time and effort into this. this looks like you took a half hour... secondly you made it loop... and it looped before the song was over... did you INTEND that we weren't going to finish watching this?

again i say to you... RLY?

Score: 7

"not bad"

submission: Sickboy and Pervert - Ep1

date: May 11, 2008

it's not bad.

keep practicing on animations, your work definately shows promise. while i was watching this, the animation (or the lack there of) didn't actually bother me. the story was pretty simple, but that just takes time to get better at.

the only issue i really have here is the characters, sickboy and pervert. nothing against the name, its just that how can you tell one from the other. in the flash it was literally just two random guys on a car ride, of which i assume are supposed to be sickboy and pervert.

they're your characters, i suggest putting more time into developing them.

Score: 10

"awesome"

submission: The Unfair Platformer

date: May 8, 2008

that was just freaking hilarious!!!

i laughed everytime i got killed, trailing with "what the fuck!?...awesome!"

great fun

Score: 10

"awesome"

submission: "Karma"

date: May 7, 2008

short, sweet, and very well executed.

lookingforward for you next work.

Score: 7

"haha lolwut"

submission: Boulder Dash! (In Color!)

date: May 7, 2008

its short, sweet, and cute.

but thats just about it.

Score: 6

"its alight."

submission: Halo ROTR 7

date: May 6, 2008

i guess the only suggestion i can make here is you should go watch almightyhans's "its a halo thing" to help you get some pointers on smoother and more vibrant animation. its not bad... its just that from an audience point of view... the dialog can carry so much of a auditory and visual work.

still funny though. good luck on your next work

Score: 8

"its alright!"

submission: Fruit Cake

date: May 6, 2008

its very close to that bejeweled game.
i never was a fan of that game and this one never really struck me and didn't really get me engaged...

its still pretty neat.

Score: 10

"pointless"

submission: famous man

date: May 6, 2008

the design, the animation, the music to this thing was pretty kickass...

only issue is that it's just an animation sequence... its not a bad thing. it just what i wasn't looking for..

nevertheless great job
10/10
5/5

Score: 10

"you need to give yourself more credit than that"

submission: S.A.L. Bully Flash

date: May 6, 2008

you did a great job! this thing pretty funny man.
the whole mic thing... actually didnt bother me, well besides the fact every character sounded the same... but never bothered me at all... probably because i never played the game so i dont know what all the char's sound like..
the design of your characters were pretty good too! the animation is choppy-ish but definately fit with the entirety of the project so i think that was good how you left it.

anyway, again great job on this
looking forward for your next work!