Score: 10

"lolawesome~!"

submission: This is UNMEI

date: May 14, 2008

first off that was one awesome flash!! i loved the animation, you really sticked to a lot of detail and the song may not be the kind i like, still very awesome for this flash.

but i still have two questions: 1st, are the kids and the medication related?? they're both green and white, whats with that.... i thought the people were like... people in the body...so like a reddish color?? i havent seen the first one which could explain that. 2ndly, who was that girl? is that also explained in the first video orthisthing?

anway greatflash
btw the ending is probably my favorite part

Score: 2

"wtf"

submission: Mcgregor my Dog

date: May 14, 2008

come on man....

RLY?

its nice you like your dog and he's born to be wild....

but seriously

RLY? please put some time and effort into this. this looks like you took a half hour... secondly you made it loop... and it looped before the song was over... did you INTEND that we weren't going to finish watching this?

again i say to you... RLY?

Score: 7

"not bad"

submission: Sickboy and Pervert - Ep1

date: May 11, 2008

it's not bad.

keep practicing on animations, your work definately shows promise. while i was watching this, the animation (or the lack there of) didn't actually bother me. the story was pretty simple, but that just takes time to get better at.

the only issue i really have here is the characters, sickboy and pervert. nothing against the name, its just that how can you tell one from the other. in the flash it was literally just two random guys on a car ride, of which i assume are supposed to be sickboy and pervert.

they're your characters, i suggest putting more time into developing them.